Wednesday, October 27, 2021

Rangitoto Sunrise

Hi Bloggers! Today I am going to share with you an another descriptive piece of writing. Its about a sunrise. Its name is  Rangitoto sunrise. I tried to make it as much descriptive as I could. I hope you like reading my post. My post is below. 👇👇👇


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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 8, 2021 at 9:30 PM

    Hi Haripriya
    Wow That's a really good piece of writing! This reminds me of my descriptive writing. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation and spelling.

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    1. AnonymousNovember 10, 2021 at 3:48 PM

      Hi Ananya, Thank you far commenting on my blog. This writing was done by our class at term 1 or 2. So that's why my punctuation and spelling were wrong. But thank you for letting me know.

      Bye hoping to see more of your comments on my blog.

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  2. Ms Laxa @ NWSNovember 19, 2021 at 10:53 AM

    Kia ora Haripriya!

    Thank you for sharing your learning. I really like the simile you used " angry like....etc" If you had another opportunity to write this again, what would you do differently?

    Looking forward to reading more,
    Miss Laxa

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