Hi Bloggers! Nice to meet you again. Today I will be sharing my descriptive writing about a waterfall. Some weeks ago our teacher Mr Wikaira gave us a picture as a prompt to describe. Here is mine 👇👇
Hi Haripriya! I haven't seen you for a long time. Well I can't see now cause it's lockdown but still. Anyways this writing is AWESOME! I love the words you used and the sentence... "It is as cold as a block of ice" Really nice. I'm looking forward to be seeing more of your blog posts! Bye!
Wow! You have used a number of language features so I can visualise the waterfall. My favourite line is "surrounded by green tall soldiers standing to attention". The use of metaphors and similes are great.
Wow Haripriya! I really like your description. There is good use of similies and metaphors which gives the reader a clear image of the waterfall and greenery. Well done! Looking forward to your next blog posts.
Kiaora Haripriya.I love your descriptive writing on the waterfall.Before the lockdown our teacher also gave us a picture to write about and the picture was the market. well I love the descriptive words you used and plus you used so many of the,that is really great to see. Please reply to my comment and once again I really love you descriptive writing about the waterfall. I hope you have a pleasant day. Bye!
Hi Prisha, thank you for commenting on my blog. Also our teacher before the lock down gave us a descriptive writing about the market. Once again thank you for commenting on my blog.
Wow! You have done a great descriptive piece of writing Haripriya. I have to agree with Ms Laxa. Whilst a copy of the waterfall was not added to your blog I could visually see and sense the peacefulness in my mind.
Hi Haripriya! I haven't seen you for a long time. Well I can't see now cause it's lockdown but still. Anyways this writing is AWESOME! I love the words you used and the sentence... "It is as cold as a block of ice" Really nice. I'm looking forward to be seeing more of your blog posts! Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Charmy, I also haven't seen you from a long time. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
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Kia ora Haripriya,
ReplyDeleteWow! You have used a number of language features so I can visualise the waterfall. My favourite line is "surrounded by green tall soldiers standing to attention". The use of metaphors and similes are great.
Did you find anything tricky while writing this?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa
Thanks Ms Laxa for your nice comment. Hoping to see more of your comments in my blog posts and also the answer to your question is no.
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Wow Haripriya! I really like your description. There is good use of similies and metaphors which gives the reader a clear image of the waterfall and greenery. Well done! Looking forward to your next blog posts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Mohini for your nice comment. Hoping to see more of your comments in my blog posts.
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Kiaora Haripriya.I love your descriptive writing on the waterfall.Before the lockdown our teacher also gave us a picture to write about and the picture was the market. well I love the descriptive words you used and plus you used so many of the,that is really great to see. Please reply to my comment and once again I really love you descriptive writing about the waterfall. I hope you have a pleasant day.
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Hi Prisha, thank you for commenting on my blog. Also our teacher before the lock down gave us a descriptive writing about the market. Once again thank you for commenting on my blog.
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This is an amazing piece, well done !
ReplyDeleteThanks Whaea Trina.
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ReplyDeleteNi hao (Hello) Haripriya
Wow! You have done a great descriptive piece of writing Haripriya. I have to agree with Ms Laxa. Whilst a copy of the waterfall was not added to your blog I could visually see and sense the peacefulness in my mind.
I look forward to seeing your next blog.
Zhanshi zaijian (Bye for now)
Mrs A
Thanks for your nice comment. Hoping to see more of your comments in my blog posts.
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Hi Haripriya
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful. I like the parts where you talked about the water and described the colour as moved from the top of the mountain to the bottom.
Maybe next time you could add some colour to the slide so it can add to the feels of your writing!
Keep it up!
Thanks Marleen for your nice comment. Hoping to see more of your comments in my blog posts.
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Hi Haripriya,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy visiting you're blog because you use details.
I really liked all the describing words you used.
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Hi Maimuna, Thank you for your positive comment. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
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Hi Haripriya I really like your blog because you used describing words and smooth and simple sentences ka pai Haripriya!!
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Hi Sarah. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
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