Hi Bloggers! I hope you are safe and doing well, today I am going to share my recount about my weekend. I hope you enjoy reading my blog post. My writing is down below 👇👇👇
I like that you used lots of adjectives to that storm at night.. I think I might've skirt right through it! When you said you slowly walked to the kitchen for snacks. Can you think if other words you could use? Cause you guys were being sneaky a? Did you get in trouble?
Hey Haripriya
ReplyDeleteI like that you used lots of adjectives to that storm at night.. I think I might've skirt right through it! When you said you slowly walked to the kitchen for snacks. Can you think if other words you could use? Cause you guys were being sneaky a? Did you get in trouble?
Happy blogging!
Kia ora Haripriya,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you started your recount. It made me want to read more! I also like you different sentence starters.
I wonder if you can use paragraphs next time?
Looking forward to the next blog post,
Miss Laxa
Hi Haripriya,
ReplyDeleteThat's a really creative piece of writing. Can't wait to see more!
Thank you Ananya for your positive comment.
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